Idol, Part Three

  • Posted on December 14, 2019 at 3:39 pm

By No One

As Zoe was carried by Shana towards the bedroom, another idea rolled around in her head. “So, um, this will sound dumb, but… I can get a, uh, orgasm on my own, just by touching myself?”

“Sure. You’ve never heard of masturbating?”

“Oh. Um, yeah, but…” She had, but she’d never given much thought to the process, or to how good it might feel. “I kinda thought that was… something boys did, I guess… or bad girls, maybe.”

Shana laughed. “Well, sorry to say, but I think you qualify as a bad girl now. Not that there’s anything wrong with that!”

Zoe smiled. Being a bad girl didn’t seem so bad, now. Sure, they’d done dirty stuff but… it had been wonderful. Beautiful, as Shana had said. She couldn’t wait to try more of it, if she was being honest with herself.

They reached a tastefully decorated bedroom, with a big bed with a dark blue cover at the center. Zoe shrieked when Shana suddenly threw her onto the bed, but the landing was actually very soft. In fact, this had to be the softest bed she’d ever touched. Still, she stuck her tongue out at Shana for the scare.

“Oh? What was that?” Shana got on the bed and crawled up close to Zoe, until their faces were less than an inch apart.

Realizing what the older girl wanted, Zoe slipped her tongue out again, and Shana took it into her mouth, gently sucking on it.

That quickly turned into a passionate kiss, and Zoe’s heart rate sped up all over again as they made out. She felt Shana lightly push her down until she was flat on her back, all without breaking their kiss. She knew what the growing warmth between her legs meant now, and found herself eager for Shana to touch her again.

But Shana seemed to have other ideas. She sat up, and examined Zoe for a moment. “Say, why don’t you try touching yourself now? Y’know, get a feel for it… so to speak.”

Zoe hesitated. It sounded really embarrassing, and she’d prefer if Shana did it, but… She did intend to explore this masturbation business later, now that she knew how great it could feel. Maybe practicing while there was someone to guide her would be a good idea.

She slid a hand down to her lower belly. “Um, I just rub my… down there?”

“More or less. What do you call that place down there?” Shana asked, looking pointedly between Zoe’s legs.

“Um… my private parts, I guess?”

“That’s one way to say it… Doesn’t sound very sexy, though.”

“Hmm. What else do you call it?”

“Oh, there are lots of words… Some girls say ‘cunt,’ for instance.”

Zoe’s eyes went wide. “That’s a really bad word!” One time, her mom had been zapping through the channels on TV looking for something to watch and stopped on some show or movie. Then someone said that word, and her mother very quickly changed the channel again. She put her hands on Zoe’s ears, as if that would block what she’d already heard, and told her to never repeat that word. The next day, Zoe had noticed that the HBO channel was now blocked with a PIN.

Shana chuckled. “Yeah, I guess some people think that. ‘Pussy’ is another word that’s very common.”

“Like a cat?” Zoe had heard that one too, but mostly as an insult.

“Sure. Just as cute, too.” Shana winked. “Though I guess yours is just a little kitty.”

Zoe laughed. That was a funny word for it, but she liked it. She moved her hand lower until she touched her… kitty, and began slowly rubbing it with her fingers, up and down. “Like this?” It felt nice, but nowhere near the kind of pleasure Shana had given her.

“Yeah, you can start out like that.” Shana was watching very attentively. “Then you can slip a finger between your lips, like I did. That usually feels better. Be careful, though. Don’t go too deep, or you might hurt something.”

Zoe tried it, pushing harder with her middle finger until it slid between her lips. She made two discoveries in that moment: that it felt more sensitive and pleasurable in there, and that it was quite moist. “Uh, it’s wet…”

“Very normal. When you’re… in a sexy mood, you get wet so that it’s, y’know, all slippery and nice. Makes it easier to have fun,” Shana explained, all smiles.

“O-oh.” That sounded a little weird… but practical. It did make her finger slip around smoothly, and she soon was rubbing herself with enthusiasm. Shana was right, it did feel much better this way.

“Mmmm, yeah, just like that,” Shana said softly. She sounded like she was enjoying herself, too. “There’s like a little nub near the top, called the clitoris, or just the clit. That’s the part that feels the best, but it’s very sensitive, so don’t rub it too hard.”

Zoe did remember how the strongest feelings had happened when Shana rubbed the top of her privates. Feeling around, she found the nub in question. Pressing down on it made her gasp. It was sensitive for sure, but it felt amazing. Trying to be gentle, she began moving her finger in circles over this nub, her “clit,” and couldn’t keep a moan from escaping her lips.

She glanced at Shana, who was biting her bottom lip, eyes fixed on what Zoe was doing. It sounded like the older girl was getting a little out of breath herself, just from watching. Zoe was beginning to suspect that Shana had asked her to do this at least partially for her own benefit. Playing along, she gave the older girl what she hoped was a sexy stare and murmured, “You like watching me touch my kitty?”

A low groan came out of Shana’s mouth. “God, yes… You’re so fucking hot,” she whispered, her voice sounding hoarse. “I mean… eff-ing. Or whatever,” she added after a moment, but it sounded like proper language was far from her most urgent concern.

Zoe smiled. She loved the effect she was having on Shana. It made her feel… grown-up. Sexy. She spread her legs wider to give Shana a better view and kept rubbing herself.

“Mmmm. You are a bad girl,” Shana said. “It makes me want to do very naughty things to you.”

“Like what?” Zoe liked where this was going. It was crazy how she’d been so nervous about this “dirty” stuff just earlier, and now she couldn’t wait to find out what “naughty things” Shana had in mind.

The young woman knelt in front of Zoe, looking up. “I wanna kiss your kitty.”

Zoe laughed. “Kiss it?” She wasn’t sure if Shana was serious.

“It’s another thing that’s very fun, you’ll see.” Shana leaned forward and began to trail her lips up Zoe’s inner thigh.

Withdrawing her hand, Zoe raised herself up on her elbows, eyes wide as she watched the older girl come closer. Was Shana really going to kiss her there?

Anticipation rose when Shana reached the spot where Zoe’s leg met her groin. She paused a second and their eyes met. Then she pressed her lips into Zoe’s kitty—once, then another time, then again and again, covering the intimate area with kisses.

Zoe stared, hardly believing what was happening. But she was even more surprised when Shana’s tongue slipped between her little lips and began licking her! She’d had no idea it was going to be a French kiss. It seemed like such a crazy thing to do… but Shana was purring with pleasure, as if she was enjoying a fine meal.

Zoe couldn’t argue with the results, though—Shana’s tongue felt amazing. After a moment, she fell back on the bed, closed her eyes, and lost herself in the moment. “Oooh. That’s sooo good.”

“Mmm-hmm,” Shana agreed without stopping for a second.

As great as it felt, it was still a weird sensation to have a tongue bathing her private parts. Zoe had no idea that was a thing that people did. It was a thrill for sure, though. Maybe it was even more exciting because it was so dirty?

Whatever the case, Zoe’s pleasure was rising fast. Every little flick of Shana’s tongue sent delicious shivers through her body, and she felt that tension within her building up, just like it had before. Soon, she couldn’t help but moan in time with Shana’s movements.

As if sensing her growing delight, Shana began to focus on Zoe’s clit, teasing it with her tongue.

Zoe cried out as an even more intense wave of pleasure hit her. She still had a hard time believing her body could feel this good. But she knew this wasn’t even the end yet, as she could now recognize the signs of another orgasm drawing closer. “I think… I’m g-gonna…”

Before she could finish her sentence, that explosion she’d been expecting rocked her to the core. Just like before, her body tensed and pure ecstasy filled her completely. Shana’s tongue was a magical tool of pure joy, the way it made her feel. This orgasm was even more powerful than the last one, shaking her from head to toe.

As she slowly recovered, Zoe realized that her thighs were tightly clamped around Shana’s head. “Oh! S-sorry…” she stammered, quickly releasing the older girl.

“That’s quite okay,” Shana said, smiling. Lying down next to Zoe, she wrapped her arms around her. “I love that you’re enjoying your first sexual experience so much.”

That comment gave Zoe pause. “So… this is sex?”

Shana raised an eyebrow. “Well, yeah… One of many ways to have sex. Is that okay?”

Zoe had sort of known that’s what they’d been doing, but hearing it out loud made it more real somehow. I’ve just had sex with Shana Belle. The words sounded strange in her mind. She’d certainly never expected anything like that to happen today. She hadn’t expected to give much thought to sex for years, actually. But now it had happened, and she felt… good, happy. “I think so. Sex is… pretty great.”

Shana grinned. “It really is, isn’t it?” She gave Zoe a tight hug, then drew her into a heated kiss.

Zoe could feel the passion behind the older girl’s kiss, and realized that Shana might appreciate some pleasure of her own. “Oh, um, do you want me to… make you feel good, too?”

“Well, if you want to, I’d love that for sure.” Shana caressed Zoe’s cheek for a moment, then brought their lips together again.

As they kissed, Zoe put a hand on Shana’s thigh, then slowly slipped it up until she was almost touching the girl’s privates. She hesitated, unsure of how to proceed.

“It’s okay,” Shana said, breaking the kiss. Giving Zoe a nod of encouragement, she spread her legs for better access.

Zoe took a moment to examine Shana’s kitty. Her pussy. Her… C-word. The lips were open like flower petals, and the inside glistened. It looked inviting, sexy. Tentatively, she brushed the moist flesh with her fingers, and felt Shana shiver in response.

Seeing the older girl’s encouraging smile, Zoe pressed a little harder, and her middle finger pushed past the pussy lips. Shana was very wet in there. It felt a little weird, but to Zoe, it was a good sign. It meant that Shana was enjoying it, right?

“Mmmm,” Shana moaned, definitely sounding happy with what was happening.

Zoe began moving her fingers up and down, as the other girl had done for her. Soon she was grinning with delight, fascinated by Shana’s little gasps and sighs, trying to figure out what gave her partner the best feelings. Not surprisingly, touching Shana’s clitoris got the biggest reactions.

“Oh yes, baby!” Shana mewled, then when Zoe brushed her clit again, her eyes went wide open. “Oh!” she cried, louder this time. Her thighs closed tightly around Zoe’s hand and her eyes rolled back in her head as her whole body shook and trembled.

It was actually a little scary, and Zoe really hoped it was because Shana was feeling good, and not that she was having some kind of seizure. She was relieved when, after a moment, Shana took a deep breath and a smile spread across her lips.

“Oh, wow,” Shana said after she’d caught her breath a little.

“Did you… get the, um, orgasm?”

“Yes.” Shana laughed, sounding a little surprised. “That was quick. You had me so turned on!”

“Turned on?” This was the second time Shana had used that expression, and Zoe thought she got the meaning, but wanted to be sure.

“Yeah, like… excited, horny, in the mood for sex. Y’know, all wet and ready.”

“Oh, right.” Zoe smiled. “Yeah, you were… pretty wet down there.”

Shana grinned back. “Well, I think you’re to blame for that, you sexy little thing,” she said, before kissing Zoe once again.

As she enjoyed the kiss, Zoe decided that she could get used to being called sexy and hot. It made her feel warm and fuzzy all over. Oh, and the kissing, she could definitely get used to that, too. She could never get tired of the way that made her feel, getting goosebumps as her tongue danced with Shana’s.

“So… it was good, right? The orgasm?” Zoe asked after they drifted apart. “I did it well?” She was pretty sure she knew the answer, considering Shana’s reaction.

“You did it perfectly. It was great, thank you.”

“Want another?” Zoe smiled, echoing what Shana had said earlier.

“Mmmm, I like the way you think, sweetcheeks. I won’t say no to that.”

As Zoe slipped her hand between Shana’s legs again, she thought it might be a good idea to try nuzzling the older girl’s neck, as Shana had done to her earlier. She began by kissing the spot right below the ear, then worked her way down to the collarbone. It sounded like Shana was enjoying it, judging by the sounds she was making, though that could also be because Zoe had her fingers moving between the girl’s pussy lips.

Glancing down, Zoe saw that Shana had a hand on her own breast, teasing the nipple between two fingers. Wondering if a kiss there would feel good, Zoe decided to give it a try. After all, it had felt amazing when Shana had licked her kitty, and while she wasn’t sure she was ready to go that far, maybe licking a nipple would feel really good as well.

Moving down to the unoccupied breast, Zoe gave one nipple a quick kiss, then flicked it with her tongue, watching for a reaction. Encouraged by Shana’s excited gasp, she continued, kissing the soft flesh and tracing little circles around the nipple with her tongue. It was actually pretty fun. “Is this nice?”

Very nice, baby. Good initiative. I think you’re… ah!”—she cried out when Zoe’s fingers brushed her clit—”a natural. You can, um… you can try putting your fingers all the way inside my pussy, if you want.”

Zoe froze for a moment. Put her fingers inside? Did grown-ups do that, too? It did make some sense, she thought, since a boy was supposed to put his thing inside during sex… Maybe fingers would feel just as good, too.

Tentatively, she prodded around Shana’s privates until she found the hole, then carefully pushed the tip of her middle finger in. “L-like this?”

“Mmmhmm, just like that. Go on, don’t worry.”

Zoe slowly worked her finger deeper, watching it disappear inside Shana. It felt all warm and wet. She wasn’t sure what she was supposed to do once her finger was all the way in, but then Shana started moving her hips, making that finger slide in and out.

Zoe quickly got the idea and began meeting Shana’s movements—thrusting when the girl pushed her hips forward, withdrawing all but the tip of the finger when she pulled back. Soon, she had Shana moaning in time with their rhythm. The older girl’s legs were wide open as she eagerly thrust her pussy against Zoe’s hand, her body glistening with sweat. It looked so dirty. It looked really sexy.

“What is this called?” Zoe asked.

“This? Aah! Fingering, I guess. Or finger… uh, eff-ing.”

Zoe giggled. That made sense. “Feels good?”

“Oh yeah. You can use more fingers, too. Or…” Shana suddenly stopped in mid-motion. She glanced at the hand between her legs, then met Zoe’s eyes with a thoughtful look. “Hmm, actually… can I ask you to try something a little weird?”

“Um, okay?” All of this had been “a little weird” for Zoe.

“You put your fingers like this,” Shana explained, touching the tips of all her fingers and her thumb together, “then get them nice and wet and, um, push all the way inside. Slowly.” She mimicked the gesture.

Zoe looked at her hand, looked at Shana’s pussy. “You mean… with my whole hand?”

Shana nodded, biting her lip. “Uh-huh. You have tiny hands, it’ll be fine!”

That did sound really weird, all right, but it seemed to be what Shana wanted, so Zoe agreed. ”Um… okay, if you say so.”

She touched her fingers together into a point and put them at the entrance to Shana’s vagina. It was really wet down there, so she had no trouble getting them all slippery. She began to carefully push in, though it seemed to her that the opening was way too small for this.

“That’s it, nice and slow,” Shana said. She was taking deep breaths as Zoe’s hand very slowly made its way inside her.

“Are you sure it’s gonna, uh, fit?”

“Yeah, don’t worry. Babies come out of there, y’know?”

Zoe supposed that was true, though she wasn’t even sure how that was possible, not when Shana’s vagina already felt so tight around her hand. Still, sure enough, inch by inch, she managed to go even deeper. Then once she was past the knuckles, the rest went more smoothly, and suddenly she found herself wrist deep inside Shana’s body. “Whoa!”

“Oh, God!” Shana cried out.

“Are— are you okay?”

“Yeah, baby, I’m—oh, shit… I’m just fine. You’re wonderful. Ooooohh, yeah. Now… now, start m-moving back and forth. But slowly.”

Zoe did as she was told, pushing forward a little bit, though there wasn’t much space to move, then pulling back, then repeating her motion. It felt so weird to have her hand literally inside someone else, but Shana seemed to be enjoying it, with lots of moans and omigods. “This feels… good?”

“Mmmm, yeah. It’s intense.” Shana began moving her hips, pushing against Zoe’s hand.

As long as she’s happy, Zoe thought. Pushing how strange the situation was out of her mind, she threw herself into the task, doing her best to give Shana as much pleasure as possible. The older girl was breathing hard now, and Zoe wondered if she was going to “come” soon.

Glancing down, she spotted Shana’s clitoris, a fleshy pink button at the top of her pussy. She remembered well how amazing it felt when Shana licked hers. She eyed the little nub, wondering what it would taste like. She glanced back up at Shana, but the other girl wasn’t paying attention, lost in her pleasure.

Slowly, Zoe leaned forward until her face was only a few inches from Shana’s pussy. There was a pretty strong aroma that was difficult to describe. The smell of sex, maybe. That erect clit looked kind of cute close-up—almost inviting. She hesitated a moment, took a tentative lick, then paused to mull over the taste. Unusual flavor, but not bad.

Shana’s response was immediate. “Aaah! Zoe! Fuck, yes! Lick my clit. Please!”

Zoe was a little startled by such a strong reaction, but told herself it must feel really good, so she did as Shana asked, flicking the little bud with her tongue as best as she could.

Shana gave a loud cry, then after just a few seconds, her body went all stiff, which Zoe now recognized as the start of an orgasm. After that Shana bucked and jerked wildly, coming out with mostly incoherent moans, but there were a few dirty words in there.

Zoe felt Shana’s pussy clamp down tightly around her wrist. It seemed to throb, possibly in rhythm with the waves of pleasure the older girl was feeling. She kept her tongue going, hoping to drive Shana completely wild.

“Okay, Zoe. S-stop,” Shana said. She took a moment to catch her breath when Zoe obeyed. “Sensitive d-down there,” she explained. “Now take out your hand, really slow.”

Zoe did just that, gently extracting her hand. Though Shana’s vagina now seemed to want to suck her in, she eventually managed to wriggle free. Wrinkling her nose, she examined her gooey hand, unsure what to do with it.

“Here.” Reaching for a large box of tissues on her nightstand, Shana handed her a big handful of them.

Zoe cleaned herself up as best as she could manage, then Shana drew her into a big hug.

“You’re so amazing, that was wonderful.” Shana covered Zoe’s face in little kisses, making her giggle. “Thank you for… indulging my dirty kinks.” She lay back on the bed, pulling Zoe along, snugly nestled in her arms. “I’m so happy I met you.”

“Me too!” Zoe hugged Shana just as tightly. The day had been awesome in many unexpected ways. She’d known that meeting her idol would be great, but now Shana had shown her what felt like a whole new world. She’d remember their time together forever. Then came the realization that this time would soon be over, and she felt tears sting her eyes. “Oh, Shana… I don’t wanna leave you!”

“Oh, babe, I don’t want to either. I wish you could stay with me all the time, but that’s just not possible. But hey, don’t cry. That doesn’t mean we’ll never talk or see each other again.” Shana gently wiped the tears from Zoe’s eyes. “Do you have your own phone?”

Zoe shook her head. “No, I’m not allowed… I guess I can give you Mom’s phone number, if you wanna call?”

Shana made a face. “I was hoping for something more… private. You know, if we need to talk about secret stuff.” She winked. “Do you have a laptop or something that you can use by yourself?”

“Yeah! I borrow Mom’s laptop to watch YouTube and stuff. She doesn’t really check what I use it for.”

“Great. I think we should set you up with a secret email address—one that you won’t share with anyone else—and then use that to talk privately. We’ll see what else we can do from there. I’ll show you how to avoid leaving traces in your mom’s browser, too.”

“Okay, sounds good.” That was all fine, and Zoe was happy to keep in contact with Shana—even a little excited to be playing spies with secret communications—but she felt like she was going to miss the… more physical stuff a lot. “But I wish we could still do… you know,” she added, running her fingers over Shana’s belly.

“I really wish so too. But I’m afraid that for now, you’ll have to be a ‘bad girl’ and take care of those needs yourself. Not as much fun, but it does the trick. Think about me when you do, huh?”

Zoe laughed, but felt herself blushing a little. It all seemed rather embarrassing, but she was pretty sure she would have to do some experimenting in that direction. Orgasms felt way too good to pass up! And she had no doubt that images of Shana would be dancing in her mind whenever she touched herself that way.

“But for now,” Shana continued, glancing at the wall clock, “well, we do still have some time…”

* * *

They did make love one more time that afternoon, and even took a shower together. That was fun, soaping each other up… and sexy, too. Then Shana helped Zoe set up her new email address, and they chatted for a while.

After that, it was time for dinner, and they met up with Zoe’s mom again—though Zoe would have preferred to be alone with Shana, grateful as she was that Mom had accompanied her on this trip. They went to Shana’s favorite Indian restaurant. Zoe liked it a lot, though it was way spicier than she was used to and she had to drink several glasses of water.

Then, finally, it was time for the concert.

It was amazing, incredible, magical. All that Zoe could have hoped for and more. She sang her heart out to her favorite songs, enthralled by the impressive choreography and cool special effects, all from an awesome front-row seat.

Her gaze was locked on Shana all night. She’d always loved her idol’s dancing, but now the graceful movements seemed to take on a sexier flavor in her eyes. The body that she now knew so intimately, swaying to the music, twisting, slinking and strutting her stuff… Shana was red hot. Watching her, Zoe felt those now familiar butterflies stir in her stomach. This time, she welcomed the feeling.

A few times, Shana looked right at her, even gave her a wink at one point. That made Zoe feel so special, the only one in this huge crowd to have such an intimate connection with the singer.

After the show, Zoe and her mom went backstage, flashing their V.I.P. badges, to see Shana and say goodbye. The star was busy signing autographs for a mob of fans, so they had to wait a while. Zoe had already gotten all her recordings signed that afternoon, so she was all set on that count, even though Shana had winced a bit when she saw how many of her releases Zoe had packed—everything she’d ever done, in multiple versions.

When they finally got close, Shana saw Zoe approach and frowned. “You look familiar…”

Zoe tried to act as if she was offended, but just ended up laughing, then Shana gave her a hug. Not as close or long a hug as she would have liked, but she understood that they couldn’t show that kind of affection in public.

“So, how was the show? Up to your expectations?”

“Omigod it was soooo great! You were amazing!”

Shana chuckled at her enthusiasm. “Thanks, sweetie. I’m glad you enjoyed yourself.”

“Sorry, um, is there a bathroom around here?” Zoe’s mom interrupted.

“Sure, right around the corner over there.” Shana pointed.

“Thank you. Zoe, I’ll be right back.”

“Okay!” Zoe watched her mom walk away, then turned back to Shana, who had a rather mischievous smile on her lips.

“C’mere, you,” the singer growled, pulling Zoe into her dressing room.

As soon as the door was closed, Shana’s lips found Zoe’s, and they exchanged a hot, passionate kiss.

“W-wow,” Zoe said, taken by surprise, but in a most delightful way. Her pulse was suddenly racing.

“Mmmm. Too bad we don’t have time for more.” Shana caressed Zoe’s cheek. “I’m gonna miss you. But hey, I slipped a word to my tour manager about maybe booking some shows in some less traveled areas—like, say, North Dakota—and she thinks there might be some potential there…”

Really? That would be so cool!”

“Yeah. It wouldn’t be for a while, though, but y’know… let’s hang out if I come around, huh?”

“Yeah! I really hope it happens!” As great as it would be to see Shana perform again, Zoe was even more excited about spending more time alone with her. She could probably convince her mom to allow that.

“Me too.” Shana gave Zoe another kiss, quicker this time. “Well, we better head back out before your mom starts looking for us.”

Zoe’s mom did meet up with them a minute later, and they exchanged goodbyes. Though Zoe tried hard not to cry, a few tears still ran down her cheeks. Even Shana got a little misty-eyed.

In the end, as she walked away, Zoe took a last look back and saw Shana blow her a kiss. She thought about the amazing day they’d had together, the unexpected but wonderful discoveries she’d made, and took comfort in the possibility that she might see her idol again someday.

The End

Join Zoe and Shana for more naughty fun in… Idol II!

 

22 Comments on Idol, Part Three

  1. sue says:

    We thought the story may have gone on longer. But very happy with what there was. Well done, No One, thanks for a good well written, very hot story.

    Sue and Kim

  2. Nathan Riches says:

    Noooooo, we want more! We want more! 😛 Great story and while I am sad it ended, it makes sense for it to do so here. Maybe a sequel where Zoe explores her newfound knowledge and finds like minded friends at school or some such? Still a wonderful story thank you

  3. Stessa says:

    So it concludes… This was a truly wonderful story. I’m normally not into younger girls in the stories, preferring 12/13 and up but this was well written and liked it.

    I liked that you had lesbian characters in the story which is something I can’t seems to find a lot of it seems. Their sexuality is usually never mentioned or more male leading. Shana helping Zoe come to terms with her sexuality was nice and a change of pace to the whole predator aspect, even though she was taking advantage of the situation.

    I can’t wait to read more from you so I’m going to try some of the other stuff on here.

    Keep up the writing.

    • No One says:

      Thanks, and welcome to the site (at least, it’s the first time I see you comment). My other stories are all linked in the “guest authors” section in the top menu, if you want to take a look. Idol actually features my youngest character to date, so if you prefer stories about girls that are a little older, you might like my other tales even more. 😉

      There is no shortage of quality stories from other authors around here as well, many with explicitly lesbian characters.

      • Stessa says:

        Yeah, I’m semi new here. Got linked here from Lesbian Lolita a while back and bookmarked it but never truly explored it. Looking around and there are quite a few good stories here my taste

  4. Swan says:

    Great story. My thoughts are similar to the comment above, now that Zoe has gained the forbidden knowledge, she must be bursting with excitement to try out her new skills, but she has no idea how to find willing playmates. How does she solve that problem? Ought to be an interesting story. Like the other comments, I love No One’s writing and look forward to more stories.

  5. David says:

    Fantastic ending No One. Great way to end it with the hope of the two getting together in the future. Well written and detailed which I like.

  6. Erocritique says:

    I’ve read many great budding lesbian sexual awakening / education stories but none better than this.
    it was like a little lesbian girl naughty fairytale.
    I too would welcome a sequel. Much like Purple Les’ amazing invisible girl, the characters and story are too
    wonderful to limit their existence to a few short chapters.
    More please!!!

  7. Euphorsyne, Thalia & Aglia says:

    Wow! great ending No One,to this amazing story, !
    Shana & Zoe finally go “deep” into their relationship…so good! Zoe knows so much more about her sexuality now and a little bit more about the bittersweet heartbreak of parting from a new found enticing friend(lover?)
    I do agree with Erocritique and others,in re: that the characters and story are too wonderful to be just a short story and would welcome future adventures as Zoe & Shana grow more intimate!

    E,T&A

  8. No One says:

    Thanks a lot, everyone. I might write a sequel at some point, I have some ideas.

  9. kinkychic says:

    Totally and utterly wonderful. I felt myself there with the two of them. God, I’m in a state.

  10. E says:

    Very well written and very hot. Also the author does a good job of skirting the boundaries of turning this into a Michael Jackson molestation tale, which it easily could have become.

    Too bad it ends here, because it would be nice to find out what Zoe does with this new forbidden knowledge when she gets back home, especially in her inteactions with her cute friends

  11. No One says:

    Thanks a lot, Kinkychic and E.

  12. Nickname says:

    Well, I’m really late, but I just had to tell you how much I love your stories! Always found that a tasteful amount of humor inproves almost any story, be it fantasy, detecive novels or kinky lesbian erotica 😉

    • No One says:

      Thanks a lot! No such thing as “late” here. Comments are always appreciated, even on older stories (and this one is still pretty recent). I do try to inject a little bit of humor here and there, glad you liked it. 🙂

  13. Sandy says:

    Re-read this story again… I am aching for more from the best writer on this website. This hits all the right spots for me!

    • No One says:

      Thanks a lot, very high praise!

      Sorry about the lack of new material, I have not had much time to write lately. My current plan is:
      1) Finish the one-shot story I’m currently working on (about two thirds done, I think).
      2) Write a sequel to Idol (mostly planned out already).
      3) Work on a new long-form story that I’ve had in mind for quite a while.

      No promises on when any of that will come out, though…

      • Euphorsyne, Thalia & Aglaia says:

        Wow! That’s quite a full plate of things to do, No One!…
        Quality not quantity is the hallmark of any great writer.
        And remember, from the movie ‘the fifth element’, what the trapped Mondoshawan alien said to the priest as the walls of the sacred temple closed in on it:
        “Time not important…Only life important.”

        keep persevering No One!

        E,T&A

  14. Bryan says:

    Loved it bit of a sad ending but nothing I wasn’t expecting

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