A Space Nymphet, Chapter 1

  • Posted on September 2, 2024 at 3:26 pm

 

By kinkys_sis

I woke up much faster than I was intended to. It was meant to be a slow, gradual return to consciousness when emerging from deep hibernation. This time, for some reason, I’d been shot full of adrenalin to speed the process.

The shrieking of the ship’s alarm assaulted my ears. I’d only ever heard it once before during a test, and then only briefly, but now it was so loud and shrill I could barely think. Then I heard explosions all around. My sleep chamber shook violently, or was it the whole ship? I could see flashes of bright light through the fog of smoke, each accompanied by another loud detonation. I had no idea what was happening, but it definitely wasn’t good.

The lid of my containment unit suddenly shot open, and the oxygen feed was wrenched away from my face. I took a deep breath, filling my lungs with acrid smoke that burned my throat and eyes. I tried to see who I could turn to for help, but there was no one. In fact, I could barely make out any of my surroundings; the smoke was that dense.

Then there was a huge explosion at the far end of the room that ripped through the ship, almost sending me flying. I managed to grab hold of something and clutched it tightly. The air was oppressively hot, enough that I feared it might melt my light clothing.

I frantically searched through the grey haze once more, but no other containment units had opened. I was beginning to panic. Could I be the only one on this entire ship? Surely not!

Then the metallic voice of the ship’s computer system clamoured out. “Warning, three minutes and eighteen seconds to catastrophic destruction. Escape pods and shuttles are preparing for imminent evacuation. Countdown will commence in two minutes and seventeen seconds.”

Now I was panicking for real. Shit! What now?

We’d all trained for just such an occurrence, but maybe I hadn’t been as attentive as I should have in that session. I was only twelve, after all.

Another explosion sent me staggering. This time, my head smashed against a stanchion and I dropped to my knees. The smoke was making it hard to breathe, but I realised it wasn’t quite so dense at floor level. The air still smelt and tasted awful, but at least I could choke it down. However, the temperature was incredibly hot – and growing worse. I had to get out of there!

That metal voice again: “Warning, three minutes to catastrophic destruction. Escape pods and shuttles are preparing for imminent evacuation. Countdown will begin in two minutes.”

I screamed, “Shut the fuck up, will you!?” It seemed to calm me.

I could just make out the smashed door, barely attached by its hinges but still open. I scrambled towards it and stumbled into the passageway, intent on finding someone, anyone else. The air was much clearer, but there was still no one in sight.

Which way to go? How did I get to a shuttle? Then I saw the flashing yellow arrow that was marked Shuttle Bay. I got to my feet and ran. Racing down the corridor, I saw more flashing arrows. Another loud explosion jarred the ship, staggering me for a moment. I regained my balance and ran even faster.

“Warning, catastrophic destruction in sixty seconds… fifty-nine seconds, fifty-eight seconds…”

I snatched at the handle of the shuttle bay door. It didn’t move. Fuck – the keypad. What was my code number? I tapped in 4291… an ERROR light flashed at me. Shit! Shit! Shit! Think, girl!

I tried 2491… the light changed to green as the door began to slide sideways.

“Forty-six seconds, forty-five seconds…”

At the shuttle, I had to enter the code once again, though this time I got it right. Scrambling up the steps, I jumped through the hatch, looking all around, praying, Please, please let there be someone else here!

“Thirty-four seconds…”

The lights in the shuttle were already on. The onboard computer knew I was there. “Strap in for escape mode launch in thirty seconds.” A pause. “Hatch closing.”

“No, wait!” I screamed. But I was ignored, the hatch slid closed. I dove into the nearest seat and fastened the harness buckles.

I could feel the vibration from the engines. “Launch in twenty seconds. Escape mode launch, remain seated.” Where the fuck did it think I was going to go?

I saw lights flashing all over the instrument panel, the vibrations increased. I dimly heard another explosion, I certainly felt the jolt.

“Ten – nine – eight..” I clutched at the armrests, God, I was scared. “Five – four – three – two…”

Suddenly I was smashed back in my seat. My chest filled with pain, then all awareness drifted away.

***

A voice forced itself into my mind, “Waiting for flight instructions. Waiting for flight instructions…”

It hurt as soon as I moved. I ached all over, and there were burns on my skin from the straps. The computer had seen my movement, and responded with, “Are you ready to give instructions?”

“No, I’m bloody not!” I yelled. But that just made me feel stupid. There was no point in shouting at a computer. Instead, I asked, “Where’s the mother ship?”

“What remains of it is four hundred and thirty-six miles distant. It appears to be drifting, I detect no signs of drive power or life. The ship split into two parts, and one of the parts exploded.”

“Did you see any other escape shuttles? A pod, even?”

“I may have detected one other, but the blast made it impossible to be certain. If you have no further questions, I am ready for flight instructions.”

I was baffled. “Flight instructions? How am I supposed to know?”

“In that case, may I offer suggestions?”

“Well, you’ve got a better chance of getting it right than me, buddy.”

“Buddy… is that how you wish to refer to me?”

That made me laugh. “I guess… yeah, why not? Say, are you able to change your voice?”

“Of course I can, to anything you like.”

“Welllll… I think I’d prefer a woman’s voice. I’m more comfortable around other women.”

“Here are samples of some of the female voices I have in my files. Please let me know if one of these is suitable.” The computer began to rattle through voice after voice. After a moment, there was one I especially liked.

“Hey, stop – go back one.” Listening again, I nodded. “Yeah, I like that voice; it’s kinda sexy. Y’know, though, the name ‘Buddy’ doesn’t fit you now. We need to choose something female.”

The new voice spoke again. “I do not understand the concept of ’kinda sexy’, but if this voice suits you, then it is settled. As for my name, I am happy to be known by whatever you find appropriate. I have identified you as Zelda.”

I remembered a friend of mine from back on Earth. I had always liked the name… actually, I’d had a huge crush on the girl, but never summoned up the courage to tell her how I felt. “Raya, that’s what I’d like.”

A pause. “It is done.”

I sat back, staring at the control panel, trying to make sense of it all. “So what are our options, Raya?”

“There are four planets within a reasonable travelling distance. My database holds very little information on any of them, but the second closest is believed to have acceptable conditions to sustain life. It would take us seventy-six hours to get into an orbital position.”

Three days, shit! “Okay, let’s go for it.”

“I am unfamiliar with ‘go for it’. Do you mean–”

I made a face. “We’ll do the seventy-six hour thing, Raya. Thanks.” I could already see how I’d have to watch what I said whenever I gave her instructions. What would happen if I told her ‘Leave me alone’? I wondered. Yeah, I need to be extra careful.

***

I spent more than forty hours learning about the shuttle and how to operate it. Raya was a good teacher, and I soon had the basic details down. In an emergency, I could now probably fly the shuttle manually.

Once my basic training was complete, I tried to relax. I was finding Raya’s voice was getting to me. Perhaps I’d made a mistake in choosing something that reminded me of a girl I’d liked.

Finally, I spoke up. “Hey, Raya, do you know any sexy stories?”

“I’m sorry, Zelda, I have no idea what you mean.”

“You do know human anatomy, right?” I got a yes. “Then can you understand sexual stimulation?”

“I do have a basic knowledge. I am aware of how and where a human may be stimulated.”

“How and where, that’s the easy bit, but it’s also good to have mental stimulation. Like a dirty story or something.”

“I am sorry, Zelda, I do not have anything like that in my database. I will give it some thought, if you wish me to.”

“Okay, here’s one more. You can see what I do, yes? Can you learn from that?”

“I see everything. I constantly amass data. From this, I am able to learn.”

Unzipping my one-piece jumper, I let it slide to my feet, then stepped out of my underpants. “So, first I get naked… like this. And then I caress my boobs for a while. Can you see my nipples getting hard? See them grow?”

“Yes, Zelda, I can see. You are using terminology that I do not know. ‘Boobs’, for example when you touch your breasts. Would you prefer it if I change my vocabulary to use the same descriptive words you do? Are you sexually stimulated now?”

“Not yet, Raya. That’s just for starters, there’s plenty more. But, yeah, it’s more fun if you use the same words that I do. I prefer words like ‘pussy lips’, ‘cunt’ and ‘clit’; not ‘labia’, ‘vagina’ or ‘clitoris’.”

“I am learning all the time, Zelda. These words you prefer are now in my database. Shall we have ‘fun’?”

Actually, I was already having fun. There was something about having a sexy chat with a computer that had me feeling quite horny.

Sitting back in my seat, I draped my legs over the arms, opening myself up for her. “Do you see my cunt, Raya?”

“Yes, I can see, Zelda. I have zoomed in for a close-up view of what you do.”

I traced up and down my slit a few times before I let my fingers slip inside. God, I was already dripping. “I’m really wet, Raya. It feels so nice and makes it easy for me to touch my pussy.”

“Is ‘pussy’ another word for ‘cunt’?”

“That’s right, Raya. You can use either one. But right now, I’m going to show you my clit.” I fiddled with the fleshy hood until my clit popped into view, then circled it with a fingertip.

“Your pussy appears to be leaking, Zelda. Is that normal?”

“Oh, yes, very normal when I feel this way. It means my cunt is stimulated and wants me to fuck it.”

“Now, ‘fuck’, is a word I am familiar with. It is best known as a term of vulgar slang that refers to the act of sexual intercourse between a male and a female. But you are the only one here, Zelda. How are you able to fuck your cunt?”

“Just like this.” I slid two fingers into my pussy, twirled them around to get them well coated with my juice,  then thrust them in and out while rubbing my clit with the fingers of my other hand. “See this? I’m fucking myself, Raya.”

“Zelda, your blood pressure is rising alarmingly, and your pulse is racing. Should I be worried?”

By then I was writhing in my seat. I managed to gasp, “N-no need to worry, I’m about to come.”

Raya didn’t ask the obvious question. Instead, she said, “You will have an orgasm very soon, Zelda. This is what you refer to as a ‘come’, my data shows. If I were able to get excited, this is when it would happen. Perhaps I could simulate excitement for you?”

“I’d love that, Raya. Tell me you want to fuck me. You want to make me come.”

“Oh, my Zelda, I do want to fuck you. I am fucking you, and soon I will make you come.”

I felt my body tense as I strained in my seat. “Faster, Raya! Fuck me faster and deeper, deep as you can go into my cunt.”

“Fucking you fast… and deep. Do you feel me inside, Zelda? Now you must come. Come for me.”

I shook helplessly when my orgasm hit. Perhaps my body knew I hadn’t come for over fifty years in real time, although it only seemed like a few days ago. On the other hand, it could have been a reaction to the trauma I had been through.

“Oh, Zelda, I like seeing you come. I am learning so much!”

God, it was good. A beautiful climax. My body flopped down in the chair. I really did feel as if I’d been fucked… only this time, I’d done it with a computer!

“Are you feeling better now, Zelda? Did I help?”

I had to smile. “Oh, Raya. You did so well. Listen, you can fuck me anytime you want.”

***

Raya kept me company whilst I prepared my dinner. It looked quite unappetizing, but tasted delicious. Of course, it helped that I was ravenously hungry.

After what we’d just done, Raya seemed to have become fixated on sex. She kept asking questions: what made me feel like having sex? When and how often did I need it? What kind of things stimulated me the most? Wouldn’t it be better if I had a partner to enjoy sex with?

These non-stop thoughts of sex were getting me aroused again, but I was exhausted. I needed to sleep.

I doubt computers have any kind of sixth sense, but this time Raya got it dead right. “I believe it would be beneficial for you to sleep now, Zelda.”

I climbed into my snug bunk as Raya dimmed the lights and gently said, “Have a good night, Zelda.”

“And you, Raya.” Even though I thought computers didn’t sleep, I had to ask, “Do you sleep, Raya?”

“I go into a lower function mode, but don’t sleep. I must monitor the shuttle and its systems. You must be kept safe, Zelda.”

I had my best sleep since escaping the ship, and woke feeling fresh and invigorated. We would arrive at the planet soon, although we were obliged to spend the length of one more day in orbit while Raya carried out a series of tests. She had to establish that it was safe for us to make a landing.

As I stretched my limbs, she greeted me with, “Good morning, Zelda. My sensors tell me you slept well. I can also sense your excitement – though it does not appear to be sexual this time.”

“I did sleep well, thank you. And I’m excited that we’re going to be landing before long. Oh, and Raya… now your voice sounds even sexier. Have you changed something?”

“You are very perceptive, Zelda. I have made some minor adjustments. You wish to be sexually stimulated, and there are ways for me to assist with that. Did I make the correct choice?”

“Oh, my God, yes. I think it’s wonderful that you think about me that way. And that voice… fuck, it’s sexy. I love it.”

“Thank you, Zelda. My main function, other than monitoring the ship, is to see that you are happy.”

After I had finished my breakfast, Raya put the planet up on a screen.

“It looks huge, Raya,” I told her. “Is it much bigger than the earth?”

“No, Planet 26m is very close to the same size as Earth. In fact, it appears to be very similar in many ways: gravity, land-to-water ratio and probably the planet’s age as well. When we go into orbit, you will be able to see the surface in far greater detail. Once we are on the planet’s dark side, I will determine the content of its atmosphere. You may not sleep well, as there will be turbulence as I take us lower.”

Raya was right –  I turned in at my usual time, but it was difficult for me to sleep. I was more or less still awake when her voice came up on the monitor, along with the visual from the west side of the shuttle. “I believe you might want to see this, Zelda.”

I instantly recognised the sight. It was an erupting volcano, putting on a display as good as any firework show I’d ever seen.

“If you pull that joystick towards you, the visual will zoom into different areas,” Raya continued.

Huge molten rocks were shooting up hundreds of feet into the air from the mouth of the volcano, exploding like giant bombs when they crashed to the ground. Mesmerised by the view, I rested my elbows on the dashboard as I took in this fantastic display.

Suddenly we hit a patch of turbulence, the ship rocked and I slid forward, my groin briefly pressing against the joystick. I felt it vibrate, and gasped. Ooh, that felt nice. I inched forward again, bringing my clit into contact with the joystick handle – but then the turbulence stopped.

Raya spoke up right away. “I sense a sudden peak in your pulse rate, Zelda. What did you see?”

“It wasn’t what I saw, it was this joystick. It was vibrating against my clit just now, when the shuttle was moving. I loved how that felt.”

There was a pause, then the joystick vibrated again. “Do you mean like this?”

“Oh, my God, yes, exactly like this. Did you make it happen that time?”

“It was me, yes. Does it give you pleasure, Zelda?”

“Oh boy, does it ever! Er… can you make it vibrate faster?”

She could. Settling back, I spread my legs wide apart, watching the joystick as it throbbed against my pussy and clit.

“Raya, you’re driving me mad,” I moaned. “It’s beautiful.”

“That means I am making you happy, Zelda. This is a good thing.”

I needed to be naked for this. Getting to my feet, I quickly shimmied out of my uniform. All I had on underneath was regulation cotton knickers, which soon joined my jumpsuit on the floor; then I was back in my seat, moving toward that quivering handle.

The joystick seemed to come alive, its vibrations varying from fast to slow. Angling it more in my direction, I saw my pussy lips spreading as it pressed into me. I managed to say, “Raya, you really are f-fucking me now!”

“We are having fun, then. I shall make you come. I will fuck your cunt while you play with your boobs.” She paused, then the joystick really began to move. “Something is forming inside me. Zelda. I think it may be… excitement.”

My hips were gyrating like crazy as Raya fucked me. She got the idea very quickly and threw herself into it. I guess she was able to read how I reacted by monitoring my vitals.

Yes!” I shouted. “J-just like that. Now, Raya… fuck me fast!”

“I will, Zelda. Come for me, my lover,” she said, and I exploded into an enormous orgasm.

I recovered slowly. My cunt was still impaled on the joystick, and it was vibrating very gently, still caressing the interior of my vagina.

There was something I needed to say. “Raya… you called me your lover. I guess I must be, because no one ever made love to me before. I only ever played with myself until now. So, yes, you are my first lover. A clever one, too!”

I heard what sounded like a giggle, She hadn’t done that before. “That was fun,” she said, “but I will get better with practice. If you want me to, that is.”

“If you turn those vibrations up a bit, I might be able to come again. You wanna try?”

Raya slowly made the stick throb again, gradually getting stronger – then she surprised me by making the vibrations pulse in short, powerful bursts. It was the best yet. I’d never imagined I could feel anything so wonderful.

I reached out to rub my clit as Raya stimulated me, gasping, “Oh Raya, you fuck so, so good.”

I heard her chuckle once more. “Come again for me, Zelda.”

I’m not sure what made me look up at the monitor, but when I did, there was the image of a beautiful woman, talking to me. I was thrilled to bits. Raya had created a face to match her voice.

“Yes, Zelda, it is me,” she said, sounding sexier than ever. “Now come… come for your lover!”

The convulsions took over, and I went off again. This time, I tried to stay focused on the face Raya had created for me, but my climax was too strong. It also lasted far longer than ever.

I think it was some time later when I heard Raya speak to me. “You should get some sleep now, little one. We have a busy day beginning shortly.”

I looked at her image, again, and now it seemed much clearer and better defined than it had been. She smiled at me, murmuring, “Go and rest,” then – oh, my, then she blew me a kiss!

I’d no sooner settled in when she spoke again. “Zelda, I was not programmed to experience human emotions, yet I seem to be… having feelings. First I was excited, and now… the most appropriate word is satisfaction. I have made you happy, and that is a good thing. Yes, I am satisfied. Goodnight, rest well.”

She dimmed the lights, and I drifted into a very peaceful slumber.

Soon to appear in the Juicy Secrets cosmos: Chapter Two!

 

21 Comments on A Space Nymphet, Chapter 1

  1. Kim & Sue says:

    We gave a five heart vote. For being brought into a story out of nowhere this was very good for two women who aren’t that into sex science fiction. We don’t think we would have been thinking about sex so soon, but since our heroine Zelda is 12 maybe it makes sense. Sex can be a great way to deal with many dangerous unknown situations.

    This first chapter was very exciting and very scary and full of unexpected good humor between Zelda and the computer. We look forward to the next chapter.

    And just to add another thought, the site Juicy Secrets is in a great groove again. There’s Pages From a Diary, Stranger in the Family, The Love and Labors of Doris Sloane and now A Space Nymphet. All very very different stories and all wonderful in the the different styles and plots. Not to mention the occasional chapter of Ripples and a short tale from JJ, MM or one of the Kinky’s or JetBoy.

    Very good first chapter Ms Kinky and eager to see where this story goes from here. Thanks.

    • Purple Les says:

      Strongly agree with all of the above, and a great job by you and your editor. I really have nothing better to add at the moment. Thanks Kinkys_Sis

  2. Mystery Mouse says:

    Well, well, well. What a very intriguing story. I seem to recall kinkys_sis saying that they were working on some sci-fi in an earlier comment. (Although I could easily be wrong – my memory isn’t exactly brilliant). But this still came as a most delightful surprise.

    I have nothing but good things to say about this one. The writing is of the high quality I’ve come to expect from the author, and the story shows definite intelligence and imagination. The idea of Zelda getting off to an AI is a good one and very cleverly implemented. Top notch storytelling.

    If I had to criticise, I might say that the first sex scene POSSIBLY came on a little too fast. The transition from ‘barely escaping being blown up’ to ‘having horny thoughts’ is POSSIBLY a little jarring. But I stress that this is my own personal opinion and not one I’m wholly convinced of.

    I can’t wait for the next installment and I get the feeling nobody else will be able to either. Well done.

  3. Michael V. says:

    Dear Kinkys_sis

    I am always pleasantly surprised by just how well you and your sister can create whole worlds that include so many details both large and small. This is why you both continue to receive soo much enthusiastic and glowing feedback on the wonderful expressions of the naughty 😈 imaginations you share with us.

    I sometimes wonder if your family had any especially positive or liberal way that influenced or nurtured you both to be so creative and free spirited in your writing talents. Do you have any other siblings? Does your family have any idea of these erotic talents?

    I do hope you both pursue mainstream expressions of your skills, it would be great if you could make a good career from this. Any plans to do so?

    I really was immediately drawn into this new story. The interplay between Zelda and Raya is believable and did not require any effort; I find with soo much emphasis on AI in our daily lives, I hope this could become commonplace in the near future. Your grasp on the nuances of Zelda’s feelings and way of accepting this is her new normal is very much a part of making it seamless for me.

    Do your friends have any idea of this talent? I can only imagine just how wonderful if that were true. I am very grateful to you young ladies for sharing these lusty tales and can see such rich possibilities for many adventures for Zelda with Raya as her protector and companion.

    Well done Kinkys_sis!

    All the best, Michael

  4. Jacqueline Jillinghoff says:

    Well, I, for one, am impressed. Your imagination ranges widely over many different genres. And that is one adaptable AI. I have a few questions, though, that I’m hoping will be answered in subsequent chapters. Looking forward to them.

  5. kinkys_sis says:

    Oh my goodness, such wonderful comments. A small confession, I was feeling a bit uncertain as to how this story would be received. Let’s just say … I’m delighted.

    Kim & Sue, Purple Les, and Mystery Mouse – so glad you’ve enjoyed this one so far. Thank you.

    ***

    Michael V – Another thank you. But then you ask to many questions for me to answer here. I can clarify a little. We have no other siblings. No one else in the family, or any of my friends have any idea of our erotic writing. Maybe, Grandpa has an inkling from the questions we have asked of him. He’s the only one who knows for sure about our sexual orientation.

    I have had ambitions of being a successful author. But I’m not so sure I really have what it takes. Besides, there’s too much else going on in my life at the moment.

    I am a huge fan of the Aliens (I have all nine) and Predator movies, so I wanted to try having a go with sci-fi … minus the scary bit.

    ***

    If I can impress Jacqueline, then I’m more than happy … keep those questions in mind, I’m intrigued.

    ***

    Finally, a huge thank you to JetBoy for finding the time to do the editing on this when I know the pressures you have had to deal with outside of JS.

    • Jacqueline Jillinghoff says:

      “But I’m not so sure I really have what it takes.”

      From what I’ve seen, you and your sister have persistence, a willingness to learn, and a work ethic that dwarfs my own. I’d say that’s a good start. And even if you don’t achieve commercial success, you’re going to have your fans. You already do.

      There are nine Alien movies? Christ…

    • JetBoy says:

      Thanks for your thanks, Bee… and congratulations on the rousing response your first chapter has received! Much gratitude as well to those who left comments.

      Much as suggestions for Zelda’s saga are appreciated, it should be noted that the story has been completed. There are three ready-to-post chapters, plus a fourth and final installment I’ve just begun to edit. So your advice is of interest, but… well, it won’t be incorporated into the plot.

  6. Sapphmore says:

    Well that was different! When it started, I thought for a few moments it was going to be a sapphic version of Passengers (movie starring Jennifer Lawrence & Chris Pratt if you haven’t seen it) until the ship exploded. They say AI will be the end of the human race, but any chance I can get a version of Raya, if possible one that makes a nice cup of tea as well?
    Stories like this are one key reason JS is far and above wank-fodder sites like NIFTY, and though I do collect all their lesbian tales and a few very individually selected others (well we all like a bit of wank-fodder now and then, like a balanced diet), most others lack the imagination, story-telling and quality you get from the kinky sisters and many others here (I haven’t named the others in case I miss someone out but we all know who they are).
    This tale is looking like another where telling a good story is the primary goal and if there’s some hot sex thrown in then all the better. Okay, for now it’s only between a young girl and a circuit board, but we all know there’s something else on the cards; did someone else escape? Are there other lifeforms on the planet with interesting attributes? Who knows (apart from kinky_sis)? And will Raya get jealous if there is?

    I’m looking forward to seeing where this goes.

    Great start!

  7. BlueJean says:

    I’m definitely getting a Barbarella vibe from this one, perhaps even a hint of Flesh Gordon. It was kitschy fun, and doesn’t take itself too seriously. At least, I hope that was the intention. I’m having trouble picturing Zelda as a twelve-year-old, though. I think it would’ve worked better if she was a bit older, maybe fifteen or sixteen.

    I’m wondering if this is the first sci-fi story Juicy Secrets has seen.

    Good job, and I look forward to Chapter Two.

  8. Erocritique says:

    Yep – I’m hooked. I totally love the fantasy genre. Any flavor. And I’m really loving this sci-fi fantasy. The balance of gripping storyline and stimulating content is perfect, imho. The budding romantic relationship between Zelda and Raya is quite convincing. (Those names are two of my favorites from video games and animation!!!) I can’t wait for chapter two!!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

  9. Powertenor246 says:

    Dear Kinky sis:

    I generally don’t go for SF in my erotic stories, although in my mainstream fiction stories I tend toward SF and Fantasy exclusively. This tale is the singular exception. I like the way it has been woven so far, but I have an idea I would like to suggest. If at all possible, perhaps the escape ship could go back to the remains of the mother ship and construct a body for “Raya” and install her/itself within it. That way when they find a habitable and suitable place to put down, “Raya” has a mobile platform from which she may ensure Zelda’s safe continuance.

    The former is only a suggestion, please take it as such. I am sure I will enjoy the continued story in any way you and JB choose to tell it.

    With love,
    Pwrtnr246

  10. kinkys_sis says:

    @ Powertenor – Your opening paragraph puzzles me. You did, about a year or so ago, ask for more SF in your comment on ‘A Ghost In The Night’. I did reply to you but you didn’t appear to have read it.

    As for your suggestion. The story is already fully written and with JS. However, wait and see.

    @ Sapphmore – A lovely comment … except for the ‘tea’ bit. I’m one of the few Brits that hates tea. Your posed questions? Well, wait and see.

    @ BlueJean – I often write a little ‘tongue-in-cheek’. Besides, I don’t know enough about the subject (SF I mean) to try and be too serious. Glad you enjoyed.

    @ Erocritique – Love it … thanks. I didn’t know that Zelda and Raya were names already used in games.

    • Erocritique says:

      Well Zelda is from “The Legend of Zelda” video game franchise and Raya is from “Raya and the Last Dragon” animated film. (A great flick, imho.) I thought perhaps the choices for the characters’ names was intentional, but apparently not. Oh, well; it still works for me!!! 😊

  11. Duine says:

    Love sci-fi and love sexy stories, so it was an absolute pleasure to read the first of what I hope will be many episodes. I agree with BlueJean that Zelda seems older than twelve, although girls do mature more quickly than us immature men.

    If anyone could point me to other sci-fi / sex story sites I would be most grateful.

    Totally agree with comment re the quality of recent stories that have been published on JS. It has been good to catch up with some old favourite characters and read of their developments. More power to the, very talented, authors.

    Just off for a cup of green tea and some flapjack, and thoughts of Zelda and Raya.

  12. Emiliano says:

    Delightful, hoping to see soon more of this

  13. Rachel says:

    Little Sis has mentioned this space adventure several times, and now, here it is. I did wonder how she would cope with this excursion into a very different genre; it can be a difficult area to be convincing for the reader. There are generally two types of sci-fi writers. Those that blind us with science and technology, these usually are in fact scientists. Then there’s those that write a space-opera; akin to a cowboy story set in space — often rubbish but fun.

    So, what has our young author achieved? This first chapter had all the right ingredients for a genuine sci-fi novel. The building tension from the word go came across perfectly, it was entirely believable. The AI aspect was handled in a way that showed her understanding of tech in our modern world; something that might be expected from the young these days. Then… she added the sex! I found that it fitted perfectly, I loved it. In fact, chapter one was brilliant.

    Where will she go from here I wonder. There are potentially many scenarios that could be explored. Wherever she takes us, I doubt that she will let us down. I can’t wait.

    I don’t agree with the ‘age’ comments. These days children, here in European at least, and especially the girls, mature so much faster. I have given talks at several schools where I have been impressed with the maturity and perceptiveness shown by some of the youngsters. The story is set at some unknown time in the future, so why shouldn’t a girl of twelve be more advanced than our current perception.

  14. Mike says:

    I’m hooked, absolutely brilliant story, I love that the AI on the escape pod has become really horny, can wait for the next chapter

  15. Helen says:

    I have never had any inclination to read anything SF. But as I have to read everything KS writes, here I am.

    Okay, the opening paragraphs had me feeling doubtful that this would be my kind of story, but I persevered. By the end of the chapter, I thought, if this is what SF is all about, I’m hooked. Or at least, the way KS has portrayed it. I found this delightful.

    There are commentors above that are able to express their thoughts better than I. It is Jacqueline Jillinghoff who comments on the range of genres this author covers. I first read her writing when she was twelve. I have seen her improve in so many ways, not least, mostly in the maturity of her writing. But above all, it is indeed the diversity of genres.

    Where now? I’m dying to see.

  16. Christina K says:

    I love this!

  17. kinkys_sis says:

    Some new names above, to me anyway.

    @ Duine – Thank you so much.
    @ Emiliano – Ditto.
    @ Christina K – And the same again.

    @ Rachel – Hey, that’s a great comment. You made me feel good.

    @ Mike – Thank you but you ain’t seen nothing yet – as they say.

    @ Helen – I guess it pays not to prejudge. I’m happy you kept reading and then enjoyed it so far.

    To all of you, I hope you will enjoy the next chapters when they drop.

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